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Hey! That was a really good first chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more. I like how you have the whole thing set up. This seems like a story I ...

First off ,im a big warriors fan. You seem to have everything in order i didnt see any mistakes. And it seems like it going to be good.. im looking ...

This sounds like a pretty good story. its the kind of stuff i read. i know its just a prologue but what was his plans and how did they get ...

first off im a big warrior fan... This is one of the best i have read everything seems to been in order but there was one small thing the cats ...

I loved it i dont care about the mistakes the other people said you made i didn't even notice them untill the other people pointed them out I was a ...

Wow this was nice and creative..you nwon't expect that to happen but there are some Questions Where did the girl come from? How did she get there? Just the simple ...

First off I Love Eragon im so glad that somebody decided to post something about it well i guess i'll start my reveiw. so its a poem it shouldn't be ...

I liked it even though i've never heard of this before I understood everthing that was going on but there were some mistakes you spelt some of the names diffrent ...