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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (6)
I wish she would just tell her parents that Carl raped her. I feel so bad for her. She is hiding this deep dark secret and nobody knows. I love ...
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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (5)
I still can't get over the fact that your a awesome writer. My mom was pregnant at 15 with me. And she told me like how she felt and its ...
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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (4)
I was practically in tears. I almost cry every time I read pregnancy because its so sad of what these teenagers do. I am glad you keep writing. I really ...
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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (3)
Wow. This sounds so familiar, but all abortion places in books call someone a murder. One thing that wasn't clear to me was she a virgin before Carl like whatever ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (2.5)
Wow. You put great description. I felt like I knew every thing, but then there's that one little secret you don't find out in till the next chapter=]. I can't ...
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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (2)
Oh. Man did have a blond moment. I didn't know your name was Dommy. Aha. I am so horrible. i don't even pay attetion. Forgot about the thing I said ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: A Bit Too Late
I really liked it. I think you should write more. But that is always your option. [quote="Caitlin Crowder"]"How could you not have known my feelings for you?" I demanded of ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Imminent Past
I really liked that. I liked how you kept the "tragic accident" in till almost the very end! A good idea. I loved your writing. Very good! Are you writing ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(11)
Wow. I really love this chapter
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(10)
I love it! I hope you are writing more. I didn't fond any mistakes but hey i stink at that.. I want to know if she is pregnant or not. ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Novel... Care to see if it sounds right?
Omigod
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 4
I really like it. But you have alot of punctuation errors. And you also sometimes use the wrong letter. But im tired and i really dont want to sound to ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 2
Hi. I really like your story. just found a couple of mistakes. “Sorry, hold on a moment” she said to the tall white man. He nodded. She grabbed her Rumor ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: 1st official chapter in "Bruisted&Broken"
I liked it. I thought it was really good. Are you writing more? The only thing that I would do is make your paragraphs shorter. The seem really long on ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: I Promise, But I Lie (1)
I love it!! But I would like to know more details about the girl, and her name. But this is great, I think you should write more and post it, ...
Jul 31, 2009