jesseatspens

It's cute, an easy read (: But I think you should try to work on the wording a bit. Some of the rhymes seemed to... I don want to say ...

He sounds a bit.. new to poetry. It was alright, good start to him. If he keeps on, I'm sure he'll improve.

for 12? this was dec. (: all I have to say, is the paper of snow line, doesn't really make sense.