jenmarie

they explained it well.. haha... your poem was full of emotion but there's something i'm looking for i don't know what it is but don't get me wrong OK? i ...

i agree with Lydia it's nice and simple and that's a good thing it allows for us to really see the simplicity of the emotions. i will be frank to ...

I lay in the dark Of a life unimaginable But yet I am living it I may not know the future But yet I have you here You have stuck ...

i love it!! this is soooooo TRUE (all caps) hahaaha Never say "I Love You" If you really do not care. ----> i think "Don't" was more appropriate Never talk ...

wow! the emotion so clear to me.. the pain and soreness.. hmm. i like it! my favorite part was You ripped my heart until I died, Beat me up until ...

i like the idea that you started with her dark side. a lonely girl. =) (because I'm writing a novel same like this. a girl got a terrible heartache) " ...