jeanluc

This is an interesting essay, based on your opinions. I feel like you are directly talking to me when I read it...the language is kept simple and at the same ...

A very good story indeed, but you moved it too fast, you need to take your time to explain his surroundings...like how everyone in the prison died etc... Also you ...

This story is good. it gives a wide range of vocabulary use. Its really interesting, and creates a wide range of images in the readers mind. however you could improve ...

This is amazing. I like the names and how you've set up the characters. Its purely a creative piece. I enjoy reading it. Its a bit similar to hunger game ...

This is an interesting story. But you need to proof read your text, there's typing errors like 'hisband' instead of husband. Also, I would like to point out at the ...