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Re: Scarf
Thank you very much for your generous review. As you may know, the piece is far from perfect; no piece really is perfect in my opinion. So many works leave ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Scarf
Thank you for your kind words; it's really flattering. I read back on my poems whenever a review comes, and I can't help but look back and notice the many ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Prayer of Modernity
I think that was a very fair criticism. This was definitely written not to be read and more for my self. In hindsight, this should not have been posted to ...
Dec 15, 2013 -
Re: Prayer of Modernity
Thank you for your review, perhaps a clarification was needed. I admit, this was one of my less structured poems. The paradox isn't one that God commits. It is evoking ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Sickness
Thank you very much for taking your time to read this.
Nov 6, 2012 -
Re: Room
Ahh... it seemed I've erred in just so many ways. I ask of all of you to forgive me of my brutish impudence that have inspired many sighs and disappointments. ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Triad
Dear Ms. Butterfinger, First and foremost, I thank you dearly for reading my work. I must confess, it does my poor soul a great deal of good that others are ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Room
Oh dear, what fine criticism! My heart is simply broken to pieces! You've undone me! Now, what am I to do for my poor writing? Shall I run to its ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: I Undress
I enjoyed the poem. Thank you. In all honesty, I know not much else to say.
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Summer and Winter
A short poem about someone, I can't help but wonder who she is... (naturally, i've never seen the show.) A nice simple poem, thank you for the post. Simple metaphors ...
Jul 29, 2011
