Published July 29, 2011
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Damn, this is amazing. I loved how the entire poem was a sort of metaphor. Or at least that's how I saw it. The girl is warmth, happiness, summer. She brightens up this boy's life. I'd had to say my favourite part was the ending though.
This part. FANTASTIC. This is just my way of looking at it, but I see it like this: she's happy on the outside, suffering on the inside. Summer on the outside, Winter on the inside. Bloody brilliant.
A short poem about someone, I can't help but wonder who she is... (naturally, i've never seen the show.)
A nice simple poem, thank you for the post.
Simple metaphors and simple descriptions: a simple poem.
Thank you once again.
-J.Cha
Sorry to quote it all, but I simply cannot choose a favourite stanza. It was short in length of the poem, stanzas, and in sentances, but that's what made it perfect. I loved the imagery, and your descriptive writing. I want to read the book now!
- Ariel<3