jayleighsmith

Alright, Pink. Here at last! I've been itchy to talk to you about this...but haven't found the time. Really, I am sorry for that. It won't happen again. But thanks ...

Hello, Jayleigh here. Since previously, someone posted nitpickys and the only things I found were simple grammar mistakes that you could probably find yourself. But I wanted to tell you ...

Hello Emmy! I'm Jayleigh and I'm here to review. the newest film called A Dark Secret. Titles are either italicised or underlined. My nose twitched as I began to speak, ...

Well, hello, Pink! I see that you do not have many nit picky reviews. I'm here to help with that. Well that’s what she looked like anyway. Comma after well. ...

Hey Pink. Sorry if this review is not as in depth as my previous one. I just simply do not have the time to go line by line with you. ...

Alrighty, here at last. Ha. Off I go… The battery was missing. “Ha, I'm such an idiot”, I snickered. “How did I miss that?” *Bursts out laughing* Okay okay, this ...

Alright, Pink. Here finally, as promised. Off I go… Strange Boy Laelia seemed too hot here. You switched tenses here. Seemed=past. Here=present. It doesn’t flow well. [She sat with 19-year] ...

:thud: I had gone halfway through this...then I walked away for a second...came back, it was gone. UGH! okay...here we go...again. Oh! By the way, I'm Jayleigh and I'll do ...

Hello. I'm Jayleigh. And I don't have any nit picks for you because I got too wrapped up in your story. When she said she was pregnant, I literally went ...

Hello, PuffSammy. My name is Jayleigh and I will review for you this evening. I looked down at street at the plethora of cigarette buds and other trash. Disgusting. :o ...

Hello again Kaykel. I figured, well, if I reviewed part one, only fair to review part two. So here I am...agian. Off I go... The dress flitted in all of ...

Hello KayKell. I'm Jayleigh and I'll be your reviewer this morning. A gentle knock rapped at the door. Which caused Rose Marie to smear her cherry red lipstick where it ...

Hello. I'm Jayleigh and I'll review this for you. OH OH OH it's 11:11!!..ahem. sorry. Off I go... I'm sitting on the curb, in the rain, drinking from a bottle ...

hello, Kikaharu. I'm Jayleigh and I'll be reviewing your post today. I drop to the ground, next to the dying willow tree and start crying. I knew that he didn't ...

Hello there. My name is Jayleigh and I am your reviewer this afternoon. Off I go... He woke up,got dressed ,ate his breakfast and hopped on the bus. This is ...