jasmine12

Oh! Oh! OH! TOTALLY HOOKED. Very well written. But, uhm what time are they in? Well, suitors should give it away, yeah? ha! I'm gonna go read the rest.

Just to let everyone know, I wrote this before after Twilight, yes. But I hadn't read the rest of the series when I finished it. So if you notice simularties, ...

Glad you liked it, like whoa! Uhm it may take longer for the next chapter to be posted because its mostly feelings and dialog so yeah, describing describing describing. I'll ...

I thought the first paragraph sounded kind of choppy, but I'm gald it didn't. I think we should banish conjunctions from the English language. It would make things easier, wouldn't ...

I agree with Sofi on this one. Lord of the Flies in my opinion is a huge snore fest!!!

I will most deffinitly take you up on that offer. Since i know little to nothing about England, :smt100 writing this book will be extremely difficult. I'm thinking that Rex ...

Haha thanks. I've always had the issue of describing but my dialog has always been strong. I put the '...' in there because she had slept all morning due to ...

Thanks for the review. I might just do another chapter to see what happens. A few things before, You said to elaborate on Rex's accent, "What kind is it?" Uhm, ...

Oh, wow. I would have spent countless hours researching martial arts, but that's good. When you get the next chapter out, Pm me, because I couldn't find this earlier. Okay ...

Of course I took your advice. That's what these things are for. The second part is up and hopefully with a lot less errors. Thanks for the review for each ...

I'll do my best to get the next chapter up. Mostly I post my older things when I have writers block. Which, right now, I have it bad .

Thanks for all the help and for being patient with my 'then's and 'than's and all of the typos. I edited it like crazy today. I'll get the third chapter ...

GASP...again. I'm really likeing this story. Keep it up!!!

What I'm actually going to do is split up the lyrics in the novel so that 1. they are shorter and 2. because of what has been said before. I ...

So, I guess its a no-go on this book huh? oh well, got to have some that arent that good to have others that are great.