jamgalloway

It's not really that I'm trying to keep it hidden, as some other people who have read other chapters have already figured out what the gun is for, it's just ...

Lol, I didn't mean to cut myself off there, but all else I was going to say is that I really appreciate your review and I'll be coming back to ...

Thanks lots! I'll check out the article(s) you linked, though I do have to say that the beginning with the gun is probably confusing because you just started on this ...

Hey, there, thanks for the review! Something I always do so it's clear as to whose POV it is, is write their name below the chapter number. So yeah, chapter ...

That'd be great if you wanted to read the rest of the story! I mean, you don't have to of course, and most of it was just introducing characters and ...

Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, I've worked very hard on this story. :)

Thank you! I hope you keep reviewing these because I like getting feedback like this.

Hey! Sorry for the delay, but yeah, you did say that Phe has a husband in this line, "God was valued, too, by Phe and her husband, Gift, dispite being ...

I really agree about the flashback actually, lol, it was kind of something I just wrote for myself at first but ended up putting in there. You ever do that ...

Why thank you! I've honestly been so distracted lately that I've forgotten all about this site so this was a pleasant surprise. And yeah, you're actually spot on about Logan, ...

Cool! Thanks again.

No, this is absolutely helpful! On my first draft of this story, I actually had the story start at the cabin, and with the same amount of characters that I ...

Sure, I can do that. I'll get to it either tonight or tomorrow. And thanks.

Oh, I know what you said about Willow's vision, that's not really what I was referring to, but I trust that you know what you're doing. Hope my review was ...

Alright, here's a more in-depth review. Disclaimer: I make no promises. Believability/Clarity: It is plenty clear as to what is going on, but it doesn't feel quite believable right now. ...