jamgalloway

Alrighty, here's my review now that I've read it: Setting: I think you had a very clear setting and did a good job with this. I could clearly see the ...

I have to agree with the other user, you did a lot of telling instead of showing in this chapter. There should be an equal mix of showing and telling--sometimes ...

Hey there, I'm gonna give a (I thought) short review of this. I have to disagree with the other user on the point about the deodorant; I thought it was ...

I'm not much of a poetry fan, and I don't know much about it except the most basic of stuff, so if you want to disregard this go ahead. But ...

Hi there, I thought this was pretty good, albeit a little confusing--at least for me. I'm assuming this is the perspective of someone who's gone through some kind of heartbreak. ...

All right, I'm gonna give reviewing this a shot, but I'm not the best at it, so don't be angry if it's ugly. 1. Plot-I loved the plot. I like ...

Hey, I just read this and I'm going to try to review it. (This is my first time reviewing, sorry if it's terrible). 1. I really liked it. I haven't ...

Wow, I was really impressed by this. There was a few grammar mistakes, but not too many. It was interesting, and once I started, I had to read to the ...