jamgalloway

Hi, there! I see you're new here, so welcome! If you have any questions or just want to talk or whatever just hit me up. I'd be glad to. But ...

Hello, there! Here's a short(hopefully) review for this so far. To start it off, I also think you should change the title, lol. I feel like that title would work ...

Hello! I see you're pretty new here, so welcome. If you have any questions or anything feel free to ask. As for this story, I think it's good, but could ...

I really liked this. This is truly a legitimate problem with our society. I'm not longer shocked by seeing and hearing things like this on the news, just angered by ...

Hello, there! I think this is an interesting premise so far. Your protagonist seems to have a strong personality. And I think the plot so far is good, though I ...

I think this started out pretty strong, but when the dialogue got started, the pacing just went to hell. Meaning, from the first line of dialogue to the end, there's ...

Hey, there! This was pretty short so I figured I'd do a review on it even though I haven't read any of the other parts of the story. This was ...

Hey, I figured I'd leave a quick review on this. To start, there's quite a few grammar mistakes in this. I'm sure you know this and can figure out the ...

Hey, there, I saw this in the green room and figured I'd review it. I haven't read the other parts to this, so I'm just going off what I see ...

"..but if this somehow failed, he would be stripped of his title and thrown in the dungeon, or worse, EXPELLED" Fixed that for you! Just kidding, but I do think ...

Well, I have to leave for work soon(kill me now), so I'm gonna make this review a bit short. Here's my thoughts on it: I thought this was really good. ...

Hey, there! This is just gonna be a really short review. Basically, I thought this was really well written and have nothing to say for improving that. That being said, ...

Hey there! I haven't read any of the other parts of the story, so I'm just popping in on this one to give a short review. A few things I ...

Okay, really sorry about being slow as hell, I really did intend on doing this the other night when I said I would, but I get distracted so easily, plus ...

Hey, there, I figured I'd leave you a short review. This was really, really good. I only have a couple things to suggest/mention, the first being that I think this ...