jake457

I have to rate everything 18 because of 'profanitive' text that may arouse.

Ah maybe, but the way I composed this piece vocally is hard to place down in the text. There's certian emotional levels in each verse with different rythmically schemes, it ...

thanks guys :), and telle, im planning to write a song with my friend sometime if that sounds good, but I used to be in a band and we almost ...

Thanks! I was trying to get the empathic/imagery to the song, the chorus had alot of tweaking so it means alot :) Also, just change the formatting, any better?

I love the whole contrast from loved up at the beginning to the just plain sick of the guy at the end. It's not usually what I see in lyrics ...

Oh, I was more taking it as a depechmode tint with a more emotional rock to it :L but if it can be done as a rap, it might come ...

Omg, I keep forgetting the puncuation but then look under my name to the lest hand side. And don't worry, it's a rap attempt, everything else I do isn't rap, ...

Ah right, after a few melodies and singing through it, then checking the tempo.... I've edited the song, the emotion is still wavey, but not to extremes as this song ...

Ah thanks, :) I will put it in the right place from now on once i find the place. Also thanks for the support people and for my first reviewer, ...

ah ok :/ well 'bitches' is just used for me to amp the anger more than the sadness and it is kind of about a time of weakness also. But ...

EDITED ON MY PERSONAL FILES! :D