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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: She's Not Me.

    Well, I feel the dashes weren't a problem, they added to the flow and how it went along. To truly analyse lyrics you must sing it or it to be ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Pens To Paper.

    As a singer (slight brag) I really enjoyed singing this song, it has a soul and purpose. I believe the best lyrics is from you're emotions and this is nothing ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: My Life's a Fairytale

    First review! Right lets get down to the business. Beautiful and deep, it has this charm and hope but at the same time reflects distress and desperation. For grammer? I ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I don't remember what I did last night.

    I like, it's very catchy as promise and quite amusing. It reminds me of some british bands like, King blues or Lily Allen but I reckon you should add more! ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon.

    Well when it comes to grammer, I don't know whats the wrong or right way to do it :L so I'm not going to review that. I think you might ...

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Daddy, Do You Know Me?

    Well in my opinion, peoms can never be too short, don't forget Hiakus. But yes, this is original for it's size I reckon lol. I love the emotional vibe from ...

    Jun 15, 2010


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