Published September 19, 2010
warning: This is a joke, and a pretty catchy one at that. I decided I'd try to write something a little modern, just to experiment. It's not really my thing, but defiantly effortless, at least to me. I may possibly post a video of me playing it, if anyone would care to hear.
Verse 1
Bright lights, they come and go.
I laughed a lot, but that's all I know.
I wake up early,
wake up confused.
My hairs a wreck, and my hips are bruised.
So I get up, and walk outside.
It's two o'clock and I need a ride,
but I sit back down and say ' what the hell'
did I do this time, do this time?
Chorus
Well I, I, I don't remember what I did last night.
Verse 2
Three missed calls, They're all from you.
I'm so High I don't know what to do.
I think I danced and I drank all night.
This tops too low, and these pants are too tight.
I don't know where I even am,
but I'm at the bus, hangin' with some band.
And they're all the same, They don't have a clue,
So what did I do, what did I do?
Chorus
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I like, it's very catchy as promise and quite amusing. It reminds me of some british bands like, King blues or Lily Allen but I reckon you should add more! Good things need to be built on, and this is very good even if it was a joke. And also, would love to hear it ;p
I like this. It's the same vibe as that Sober song by Pink.