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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: She's Not Me.

    Well, I feel the dashes weren't a problem, they added to the flow and how it went along. To truly analyse lyrics you must sing it or it to be ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Pens To Paper.

    As a singer (slight brag) I really enjoyed singing this song, it has a soul and purpose. I believe the best lyrics is from you're emotions and this is nothing ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: My Life's a Fairytale

    First review! Right lets get down to the business. Beautiful and deep, it has this charm and hope but at the same time reflects distress and desperation. For grammer? I ...

    Oct 20, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I don't remember what I did last night.

    I like, it's very catchy as promise and quite amusing. It reminds me of some british bands like, King blues or Lily Allen but I reckon you should add more! ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon.

    Well when it comes to grammer, I don't know whats the wrong or right way to do it :L so I'm not going to review that. I think you might ...

    Jul 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Daddy, Do You Know Me?

    Well in my opinion, peoms can never be too short, don't forget Hiakus. But yes, this is original for it's size I reckon lol. I love the emotional vibe from ...

    Jun 15, 2010


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders