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jacquelinevillegas10

  • Poetry » General, General Re: I will let you down

    This poem is the daily struggle of teens around the world, every day. To be quite honest I can relate to that poem soo badly. It could be about me ...

    Jan 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Once More

    This poem is really beautiful. It tells a story in only a few short lines, with the reader able to draw their own conclusions about the lovers. I liked that ...

    Jan 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: Insane

    when I read this, i got chills down my spine. This story is malicious and deliciously evil. your take on insanity and murder is eyeopening and thrilling. it's like looking ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: That...Father, Daughter, Relationship

    This poem will leave readers guessing, it's certainly leaving me clueless....but its also going to leave a question hanging at it's you really want to know? It's painfully beautiful and ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: The Remaining Survivors: Prologue

    your story is both darkly humorous and seriously thrilling. your words create pictures in the readers' minds and i look forward to finishing reading it (if you do decide to ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: They Called it Major Depressive Disorder

    This poem is very true and I find your points of view unique and eye-opening. I think everyone goes through something similar to this, although they never get diagnosed for ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: I Wanna Know Who I Am and Who I Need

    No one truly knows how to find themselves. You said it yourself, simply looking in a mirror isn't enough. And although you feel like everyone else knows who they are ...

    Dec 22, 2015


I would like to be the air that inhabits you for a moment only. I would like to be that unnoticed and that necessary.
— Margaret Atwood