jackolantern

Thanks for the input! I'll definitely take your comments into consideration. I didn't notice the it's so that's great to hear. On the other stuff, I like to word my ...

THANK YOU! Yay!

Thanks! I have an emotional disability which means loads and loads of drugs. Usually I have a better attitude, but lately I've been very fed up with serotonin and dopamine ...

sorry, I don't know what i'm doing on here yet. I think my review ended up in the replies to someone elses comment...I mean what I said though! hope you ...

This is really awesome. Totally made my day. I got a little confused in the middle too with the metal bed and everything, but it became clear to me after ...

Thanks emily!

Thank you so much Bandgeek101! I will definitely try out your suggestion. I am so thankful for such a positive reaction! thanks!

Thanks so much for your feedback! It's my first post on for a long time, so I appreciate it a lot! thank you :)!!

Hi! I like where this story is headed--very creepy! I wish it was longer though, I love it when horror stories become really suspenseful. You know when the protagonist is ...

I really like this. I find it kind of ironic that your avatar is sherlock because this sounds like something he would say. I think you've got a compelling character ...

thanks so much for all the feedback! i'm going through and editing this evening! just so everyone knows, the line "poem as lovely as a tree comes from another poem, ...

This is a beautiful peice. the beggining was a little confusing, but it becomes clearer and cleare as you go along. i loved the ending. It seemed appropriate that only ...

thanks so much! this is my first poem on here, and i am so glad to get some constructive comments! your reveiw was extremely helpful! :)