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jacklo

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Hand

    i gotta "hand" it to you, this is good. "Waking up is a constant pain. Much paperwork and plastic friends, Everything is simply pretend." i like this lines to start ...

    Nov 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Moist Chunks

    hehe moist is a funny word. in all seriousness though, "The word "moist" feels like stepping into a puddle with socks on, it lingers in your mind like damp laundry ...

    Nov 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Chickens, Spiritual Re: A Medley of Eggs

    howdy, imma give my first ever review attempt. "a lady from church with eighteen chickens gave us a carton full of eighteen beautiful eggs." great start, love the image of ...

    Nov 22, 2024


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