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Wow, nice one! This is really intense and super real, I love it and I can't stop reading it over and over again! *clicks like button* - Jessica

Thanks, for this and all the other reviews you've done for me. : ) Appreciate them!

okay, thanks!

Thanks!

Chapter Two- I just posted it! : D

This is so sweet, Kenzie! I think everybody else before me has covered everything, so all I have to say is I can't wait untill you post the rest!

Thanks a bunches! I'll definatly work on editing, I actually finished the next chapter but haven't got a chance to post it... Anyway, thanks again! - Jessica

Thanks!

I just now found out about this, and this is amazing! You're a great writer by the way and I don't have anything negative to say about this! Great job, ...

Alrighty, thank you!

Thanks for all the suggestions, I appreciate them so much!

Alrighty then. Thanks for the review! ; ) I haven't got a chance to edit much and yep, my grammar sucks. : D And yeah about the expensive telescope, it's ...

Thanks!

Well done, I like this a lot. It was pretty and well writing. Nice job : ) Keep writing, I really enjoyed this! - Jessica

Thanks ( I was bored one day, wrote then typed quickly, sorry some of you didn't enjoy it. ) : ) A pricker? Uh, slang sorta thing for thorn? My ...