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Hello! I am Jessica and am here on request to review this piece today! Overall I didn't catch any grammar or spelling mistakes. That's good. It's a happy day for ...

Hello! My name is Jessica and I will be reviewing your novel today! I would just liked to say that I thought it was really good. i hope you write ...

Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing Firecrow today! First of all, I think the story has potential though I wasn't completely getting the whole thing. It could ...

Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing this today! I am going to start with grammar and spelling mistakes. The mistakes are explained after each line. : ) ...

First Of All, Hello! I am Jessica and I will be reviewing Journey Of A Dead Man Today! I thought that it was a bit short to be able to ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jessica and I will be reviewing The Message today! I thought the details were beautiful and made me feel like I was really there. But ...

Yes, I do agree with Sam up there. The first sentence needs to make the reader want to read more. You need a really gripping beginning to stay with the ...

I really think the story has potential. I think you may need to work on using a tad more details and really help us realize your character's situation. Really try ...

I really enjoyed it! The novel really does have a great plot and I think your writing is great. I know a lot of people like this story already and ...

I really like your writing style, simple yet descriptive when nessesary. The chapter was great though slightly short. I hope to hear more about the girl and her sister in ...

I liked it a lot, It was totally new and exciting. Disturbing in a fun and clever way. Lovely detail and descriptions. You're a wonderful author! It's a great story! ...

I thought it was really great! It took me some time to read but I really couldn't stop myself. It was new and exciting as well as intense and gripping. ...