itsjustemilie

Hey Flower, All your other reviewers have nitpicked for me i don't feel its necessary to repeat what they have already pointed out. So I'll just jump right to the ...

This is a very interesting poem. You really got your point across to the reader. The imagery you used throughout the poem is wonderful. You certainly have some good poetry ...

Sweet, Your story is kind of like the ceremony's that you where telling me about. I love the second half of the story, the whole idea is creepy but interesting ...

That was absolutely wonderful, it sounds like the type of beautiful catchy song that you can't help but sing to when it comes on the radio. it even sounds like ...

wow, this was beautiful. Even though the poem was quite short you managed to get your point across to the reader. I Love a poem that has been written about ...

this is beautiful and you can tell its created from your heart. I have felt this way before, and i know many others have also.. You really keep your audience ...