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Ah! The criticism-hating writer... I feel sorry for you, homie

you koshur! HEY HEY HEY! Kya haz haala chaala!

Disappointing. And no, it's not the same thing. I mean, like, I was fourteen when I wrote this. It's unsophisticated and childish, as I made clear to mah homie Reise ...

Very poetic. But, umm, overdone? Like creepily overdone? Think of someone saying all of this to you in person. Normal? Hardly. It's just not believable. And somewhere in the middle, ...

You know... narration that keeps you there.

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You know... narration that keeps you there.

*yawn* couldn't even make it past the first paragraph. Go for 'The God of Small Things' by Arundhati Roy and see what delicious narration tastes like.

Yo. Read my novel next year. Halfway through second draft right now. And, are you, by any means, a Rushdie or Kafka Fan? I could do with some like-minded litterateurs

Aah! Dear Julius! Hath you learned nothing of peace in death? Safiya, to our great misfortune, commits suicide. It is a tale of emotional wreckage. The strong unofficial feminist (who ...

You know what dude? I mean, what exactly is fresh about this?

So, not to be a grammar nazi, but there are loads of errors in here. Grammar and vocabulary are the bread of writing, keep that in mind. And I'd say ...

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*post, I mean

Well, I'm sorta through my novel's first draft. I'll publish some selections if you want me to. P.S. I'm done with short stories

@ReisePiecey unsophisticated and childish stuff for pre-teens. Wrote this four years back. Happy bro?