irsyad23

It's amazing how these few words can sum up a cohesive and meaningful story. I really like this! I do however feel like the story is too linear and simple. ...

"I am the Sun I am the Trickster that hides when you need me most I am the Bright Orb that brings warmth to your body I am the Heat ...

We used to live in a village in India then and when my grandparents and mother found a suitable suitor for my aunt, they decided to bring the family to ...

Hi. I really like this poem. The language styles are great and extremelywell written. "today, the old pot whines upon the stove, returned as if a myth from dreams, gurgling ...

Hey. This story is extremely well written. Like I was reading a novel from a professional. I liked the concept of this story. But I think you should space each ...

Hey there. It's a nice story you wrote. You use so many bombastic words to make your writing beautiful and extremely well written. But I just came across this one ...

Hi... This was a great read! You skill of writing and giving descriptions were marvelous. I liked it very much. You used many bombastic expressions which was good. :) I ...

Hi there... First of all I'd like to welcome you to Young Writer Society. There's a few things you should remember before posting your stories here. First of all, the ...

Hey guys.. Just for your information. I found out the words “blond” and “blonde” are not wholly synonymous. So what’s the difference between the words “blond” and “blonde”? (besides

Hi... Here's to review... First of all, I like the your idea of dragon and wolf, which was new. But I found there are many errors. As I lay in ...

Hi.. Here's to review! First of all, it was a good poem. I like the way you use many style in writing poem, which make your poem looks professional. I ...

Hi.. Here's to review. First of all, this was good. I like the way you use complex sentences, such as; Power and status radiated off of the master, much like ...

Hi there! Here's to review... It was dark times in the faraway lands of Zurrak. The sun grew weaker day by day and many stars from the night sky blinked ...

Hi. Nice poem you wrote. I love the imagery... Tear Drops Tear Drops Always Fall Repitition is just a wonderful style. Also, you managed to follow the same rhymes... Keep ...

Hi. I love the way you tell the story. But it was less detailed. :) I walked between the stalls of fabric and jewels, talking to each stall owner, looking ...