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irishdancer1199

irishdancer1199

  • Poetry » Culture, Literature Re: 451 Degrees

    Beautiful poem! I have never read Fahrenheit 451, but I have heard of it. I love this poem and the descriptiveness of it! I especially like the part where you ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Milo

    Hi! irishdancer1199 here to review! Okay, so first off, when you wrote, "I don’t remember it but that doesn’t stop me from knowing what happened.", there should be a comma ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Blink

    Wow. There is no way to describe how psyched out I feel right now. It was creepy, it was confusing... I loved it! Just one thing. Where you wrote, "entrapped ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom vs safety

    This is interesting because I feel what you're saying, but at the same time I'm confused. I think you're trying to say that we're supposed to have freedom, but instead ...

    May 24, 2014


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