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Happy review day! I'm doing fine and you? Lol. About the title. Actually I have no title as of now. Thank you for taking the time to review my work. ...

"Boom!" My opinion on this beginning is that it could be better as a description of the sound. The sound of what the boom is. And considering it is a ...

I appreciate your help. "your use of semicolons is incorrect. Semicolons are used to separate lists with extra detail, and to separate two clauses that could stand apart from each ...

Like I said with cielo, would you be willing to read this story again after I pick it up again, rewrite it and post it on this site.

I haven't ben on this site for a long time. This comment is very late, but I just got back on today, and didn't even recognize some of my peices ...

i really really ...really enjoyed reading this although i wish i could heard what it sounded like...other than that i think that it was pretty awsome and very detailed.

haha...i really enjoyed that .you got that off of spongebob didnt you, but anyways ill be singing this everytime i log in to yws now.

tell you the truth i kinda didnt take my time on this so i wasnt really noticing /worrying about the puncuation and stuff..but im glad you liked it.

i really liked this peice you wrote.i think that you used alot of details which made the story vague in no way.hope to hear more of this story because its ...

i really really like this song.....really

thnks alot