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"My thumb had been hovering over the call button for three and a half minutes, still showing no signs of pushing down. I cradled the phone in that hand, using ...

all i can say is that i love how you began the story with the foreword..overall your story was well written and not vague at any point.i love the characters ...

i really enjoyed reading your short story.i think you used vivid details and at no point in the story t was vague to me.i also noticed how well the vocabulary ...

i wanted to expess how much i think of your peice...i like how you used the simple game of chess to express what was really going on with the character.there ...

wow this really is a great read.your writing is amazing,and i hope to read more of this story.i expecially loved the way you started of the story...i usually start mine ...