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OK, so I love this poem but I really wish you hadn't asked about the last line because now I really don't like it! Something about the way I read ...

I like that it's short, sweet, with a charming beet. I hope you presented it via an ipad or something real "techy"! :P P.S. I looked up "miasma" and I'm ...

This poem is all over the place! Is it written in a stream of consciousness style? At first your describing hatred with minimal words but then you start talking about ...

Wow! This poem's descriptive language is devastatingly powerful! The theme is very well portrayed and SHOWN not just told. I love your word choice, it really had me reading and ...

This might be terrible, I don't really do poetry that much because I can never find rhymes but I just had these words come to me and I couldn't ignore ...

OK so cool assignment. I had to do this once and wrote a satirical parody of Genesis. It didn't blow over well and I got a zero... I'm sure you, ...

You will never guess when/where I wrote this poem. Homeroom By Romance Otaku These are the days I wish I could just leave. Alright, cool line . Why is everyone ...

This is a poem i wrote for English, but i thought that i'd post it. I'm not sure what type of poem it is. It might be free verse, i ...

OK, well first off, I think that this poem could have taken it one step farther and written the poem in consideration of a fish's lack of self awareness. For ...

Since you've already been heavily reviewed I'm just going to applaud your well polished poem by saying it's original, heavenly descriptive, and draws very well from Greco-Roman mythology/history. The

Wires all over me, machines that help me breathe, A heart that can be seen on a screen,

Dear god,

I liked your gripping story here. The descriptions did a good job of creating a visible world of despair. The ending was sort of optimistic and hopeful but at the ...

I have nothing negative to say of this poem. It was very imaginative indeed. The descriptions were fantastic and the use of capital letters to emphasize words was subtle and ...

Time stands still, the walls close in, My breath shortens, my eyesight dims. My hands start to shake, my legs give way, My body is acheing from the torcher you ...