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It wasn't really the friendships themselves I had a problem with. Everyone was mad at each other all over a misunderstanding. Why couldn't it have been about a fight? Something ...

That makes a bit more sense. (Darn those plot requirements) Nonetheless, I still hope my review can help. I wasn't trying to be mean at all.

In my opinion, you probably should explain the fire thing. Not all readers will pick up on that, and you could have some just thinking 'what the heck? why is ...

Thanks for reviewing this, Lizz!

blasphemy!!!!!

this is sad. ee cummings would be disappointed. hehe, i love you for doing this

I'll continue this conversation in pm. Don't worry. I'll help you the best I can.

I just skimmed this, but this is definitely the sort of thing that would work without tags. Obviously you still need most of them, but taking a few obvious ones ...

I think that maybe the funeral could be expanded and given its own chapter. I feel like a lot could be done with that, but I am a really big ...

Thanks for your kind words, especially on my rhyming ability. (Really I just use for inspiration). This is probably my favorite poem I've written, but it took me several days ...

Sorry for not replying sooner, it's just slipped my mind. Thank you for your kind words about my poem. It's nice to see that it resonated with someone.

I just want to say that I think that a blog post may be a more appropriate place to post this kind of thing. Or even a post on your ...

More like, I'm an edit as you go, slow writer. Haha *high fives*

Thanks for your comment on my highly polished writing. To be honest, I only went through a rough draft and then edited it myself and ran it through an online ...

I don't really have much else to say other than to let me help you. I'm willing to look at your work before you post it. Just send me a ...