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Hi, skylnn00writes. Storm here to do a review. I'm only going to review the first 2 chapters you have here, but let's jump right into it! The commotion around me ...

Hi, Child! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! “Confess and repent for what you’ve done,” Reiner continued, “and your children will be given a ...

Hi, currey0. Storm here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! First and foremost, you need to work on your spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. To be ...

Hi, Werthan! Storm's here for a review, so let's jump right into it! he whispered as harshly as a shout. I understand how you're trying to describe they way he's ...

Hi, RossLightning! Storm's here for a review, so let's jump right into it. Rene Chuopa-Zenying was a 40 year old Chinese footballer, playing for the club RB Salzburg, and he ...

Hey, Child! Storm's here to do a review as promised, so let's jump right into it! Before I note anything else, I just want to say that this length of ...

Greetings, jimss23. Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it. The room was dark, and Shujaa flicked the lights on. Here, you have a compound sentence; ...

Greetings, cmtomao! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! Raising the age to run for political office has been a topic of the state legislation ...

Hey, GoldenQuill! Storm here to do another review! So let's jump right into it. and high cheekbones jar out of her long face, making her appear automatically more hostile than ...

Hi, regismare! It's Storm here (yet again) to do a review. I'm interested to see how you've expanded this, so let's jump right into it! He hung by one arm ...

Hey, GoldenQuill! Storm here to do a review (because Crimson suggested it when I asked for requests, so thank him for this review, not me.) So let's jump right into ...

Greetings, Ross Lightning! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it! A majestic creature which can soar through the sky, perilously swooping from side to side, ...

Hello, regismare! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into this. It slid serpent-like through the night, yielding to his every touch as if it and he ...

Hello, TheStormAroundMe! Storm's here to do a review, so let's jump right into it. The persona was his first lie. You may want to change 'the' to 'his' I'm not ...