inkcharmer

This is great! Your repetition is great, not just because it so beautifully displays the struggles of unrequited love but also because it doesn't reveal itself all at once. In ...

Honestly, I was afraid this would be very cheesy when I stumbled upon it, but it is great. It expresses something I think every writer has felt. I'm a pretty ...

This piece is really interesting. When I first looked it over I was a bit confused because I was in narrative mode and abstract thought just wasn't working at first ...

Oh wow. I seriously got chills reading this. This is a situation that is all to real and close. You really captured the feelings of anger and helplessness and sadness ...

First of all, wow. This is really poignant. which the short length helps with. I feel like the brevity of your poem really helps convey how briefly the relief given ...