indieeloise

Thank you so much. Yes, I capitalized the painter's title on purpose. I will review this in terms of punctuation, thanks for the suggestion!

Thank you. I revised the poem, especially the last stanza, and hopefully the message is a little more clear now. :)

Thank you. I revised the poem, especially the last stanza, and hopefully the message is a little more clear now. :)

Thank you, Firestarter. I took into consideration what you suggested (agreeing completely with everything), and just posted this revised version. Thanks for taking the time to read and review! -Indie.

Thanks for the review and great advice, I will work to channel it in the future!

Thanks so much! Really means a lot :)

Thank you very much!

Yep that's what I was going for! Haha thank you.

I will definitely shape up the second half. Thank you so much.

I felt the same way when writing the last half. I hadn't edited that part yet when I posted it because I was working to finish it for an hour ...

I knew something was missing from those two separate lines, and you nailed it! I have revised a little of the punctuation, thanks for pointing it out. Yes, the painter ...

Thank you so much.

I know exactly what you mean by the puzzle being a little too big; I will work to tweak that. Thank you!

Thank you so much for your support!

Ah, this was beautiful. No criticism whatsoever, so this is just a comment. But I'm right there with you on wanting to spend my last days far away with a ...