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First of all, I LOVE your poem:) Second of all, Your title caught my eye :) I'm a dancer myself and it really caught my attention, and turns out, it ...

It's really good:) You have good rhythm and it's really cool how you used all the good references people can relate to and can imagine themselves thinking of what you're ...

You should break it into stanzas like futurepoetofamerica said. It would really help!!!!! Love, Rachel