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Like I said, it was beautiful, Alex :) Seriously wish I could write like you...

This was powerful, creepy and brilliant. Ten minutes later, I lugged my suitcases out into the hall. I paused for a second and looked around. This had been my home ...

Hey! I liked this, it was a great read! I didn't realize she was a wolf until you said something about her fur. But it was nice all the same. ...

Hi! Thsi piece was very touching and I loved it His laugh was like long forgotten bubbles safely secured under a rock in a fish bowl. This was by far ...

Ok. Guy with platinum blonde hair, green eyes and glasses? Check Girl who thinks she's falling for him? Check Heart break? Check Coffee elves? Check Well, everything seems to be ...

Wow. I thought this was great! You have a talent for writing, Though the chuck at the end was kind of difficult to read, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The ...

This was very absorbing and compelling to read. the faded numbers 1300 were painted boldly This is the only flaw that really bugged me. If the letters were painted boldly, ...

Hey! First of all, great poem, secondly, nice rhyme scheme (you know, AABB. really effective). We learn and share our knowledge We are empowered to do our pledge I wasn't ...

It was very sweet ans sensitive, shows a lot of emotion in just a few lines. The brief description down't leave much to the imagination. It would be better if ...

Hello again Kakagirl. This was AWESOME, needless to say. Anyway, the rhyming was amazing and I could grasp the storyline of the poem instantly. Golden Girl is an awesome phrase. ...

This was great. I read it and you actually have quite a talent for this type of thing. I love that it didn't end in the cheesy cliché way that ...

I love how you conveyed so much emotion into this description of love. The poetry of this is simplistic, yet breathtaking, and your talent is awesome. The rhyming scheme, however, ...

I agree with MickeysTWin. I know how it feels to be confused about life and I defiantly know how it feels to be blind (had to wear a scarf around ...

I agree, it was a pointless war.... over a tree? I thought that it had an element of childish description, but it goes well with it. The war seemed interesting, ...

I admit.... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! You are a genius. I love how you never showed if it was a boy of a girl narrating the story, which leads the ...