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  • Short Story » Humor, Literature Re: A Grammar Nazi visits the Doctor!!

    This was hilarious! At first I thought like the grammar Nazi I am, picking out every mistake, until I realized that that was the whole point. I plan on showing ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Literature Re: A Grammar Nazi visits the Doctor!!

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you so much!!!

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you so much paula! I actually am starting to agree with the comments in regards to the 777 line, it does seem a little off.

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introduction

    Absolutely, I will keep you updated Kamryn!!! Thank you so much!

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introduction

    probably

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introduction

    I don't know what part lol I'm legally American and my family lost touch with their roots :(

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introduction

    Sorry about the spaces, when i transferred from Word Doc to YWS, it cut out a lot of the spaces. I tried to catch as many as possible. I like ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Untitled

    Thank you very much! I do feel, however, that I need to let you know that I am not writing about a person. This was written, literally, about my voice, ...

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you!!!

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you!!!

    Sep 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you so much! Originally, the line was "I ash it on this stage," as it was written for a different platform, but I completely understand what you're saying. As ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me to hear this because this is one of the few poems that I pulled from my heart.

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Overdose

    Thank you very much!

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Untitled

    Thank you so much Sillia! My explanation for the terrible formatting is that I'm not the kind of poet to look at structure because I write my poetry as if ...

    Sep 6, 2014


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