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Thanks for the review! I took the advice to add more details where you suggested.

I wanted to say, before anything else, that this was a fantastic story. From the supernatural element, to the introduction of the plot, to the character development, this was an ...

First, thanks for the review/welcome! It doesn't really skip time, just Myzair and his mother had arrived at their destination i.e. the Dedication Ceremony. I probably should have put that ...

Thanks for the review! Some of the questions are answered in the first few chapters, while others are answered in later chapters. Anyway, the prologue-all of the people are elves(just ...

First of all, thanks for the review! It does help a lot. The reason the storm was so sudden was because that is showing part of Myzair's power. Which is ...

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. I agree that they could be more interesting i.e. the character's dialogue, and that is probably the most difficult thing in my writing. ...

Thanks for the review! As I said earlier, I have revised the prologue a lot. Plus, Myzair and the child are two different characters, Myzair being the main character. More ...

No problem. It was a very interesting piece to say the least, and there was little I could "complain" about. Like I said earlier, run with the idea and don't ...

Fear not! After much consideration and some addition/subtraction, the above monstrosity has been rewritten. If you like the idea, thank you, and if not, thank you too I guess. Hopefully, ...

Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it. The prologue that I posted above was mostly just an introduction into the world, and it was pretty bad I will ...