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Re: Stronger
Very very nice! I agree with the capitals thing...try to use them a bit more consistently. Also, you spelled "you're" as "your". Just thought you should know ;) Very well ...
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: My Painful Death
Oh. Sorry. I'm not exactly a very good critic. I was trying to be nice, people! :) Anyways...here's a 'helpful' critique, then: It's pretty good, except for GRAMMAR GRAMMAR GRAMMAR! ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Happy New Year, Indeed.
Hey, Oh wow. I liked that! What I don't get, though, was the cheese cube. Maybe I read it wrong, but he got the cheese cube from inside the bathroom?? ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: Nothing Comes To Mind.
Hahahahaha Nice!!!Original, too! I liked it. A lot! Keep writing! Jasmine Hart...I hate to correct you, but in your signature? Her name is Stephenie Meyer, with an e instead of ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: death
Hey, I agree with both Colleen and SeraphTree. Much too vague! And the whole mega-elipse thing? I do that when I'm talking on MSN, but in a story, it's just ...
Dec 28, 2007