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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy
    Re: Bright eyes. Chapter one

    You are very imaginative, as this is an interesting concept. There are still a few things you could improve upon, though. You want your reader to be hooked into your ...

    Jul 12, 2016

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: apoc-a-lypse, n.

    Wow, this was really great. You did a great job of keeping a voice for the little girl separate from the rest of the story. I would recommend describing a ...

    Jul 12, 2016

  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: I'm So So Sorry

    A lot of poems are about trying to 'win' an argument, and so something like this is always really refreshing. You spoke about pain and regret in a way that ...

    Jul 11, 2016

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Walking to Work

    Your description was great, and I loved the way that you hinted at being elderly. It was interesting, and I loved the more open ending. However, the writing was a ...

    Jul 11, 2016


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