icebender28

I liked it. Good choice of words, and the flow was nice. I liked how you talked about love and pain, and how the feel was sad and in pain. ...

I thought it was cute, you really did a good job of making us feel for the characters. i liked the feel of hoping , but not hopeful, if that ...

i thought it was really violent with a very funny twist to it! Just the way i like it! :D I think you did a great job turning every little ...

I loved it! It was hilarious! you did a great job with the humor and I love how you made everything that could go wrong, go wrong for the princess ...

i really liked it. I think you did a good job describing and making a good feel to the story. I liked your take on it. I think that most ...

I really liked it! I thought it was cute how you took Remus and Tonk's story and built on it, even though they don't really talk about it in the ...

I think you did a fantastic job! This is really cool, and I like the feel you gave to it. Honestly, i thought you did a great job with the ...

I thought, once again, really great job! I had one question though. When does this take place? I don't think you ever actually explain that bit. Other than that, great ...

This is really good! I love how you wrote it and showed the charaters feelings. He has no more than a month to live and it pains me deeply that ...

I loved it! Very mysteriuos and I loved your sense of humor, too! It sounded like a book. It hurt like a book. Ellie picked it up off the floor. ...

I really liked it! very nice feel, and good job setting the scene. You should really turn it into a novel! I would definitely read it. Maybe you could have ...