icanhassuicide

I cannot find anything wrong with this. My only suggestions would be for titles. You could choose things from the poem, like divine lady, or make up something that gives ...

This shadow creeping upon me I want to rid of it Wanting to tear my soul apart Like a black cloud above Overall I could not have said this better, ...

I would love (no pun intended) to be able to tell you I know how this feels, but I don't. Overall this was a wonderful poem, but I believe the ...

This poem has clear meaning, and I love how you thought of it whilst eating breakfast. This is well thought out and carefully rhymed, in such a way that I ...

I absolutely loved how dark and twisted it was. I use dark poetry as a form of letting out all of my hatred and anger, and I wish others would ...

This was wonderfully rhythmic. I do not understand what it is like to have sclerosis, but my younger sibling struggles with it every day. It was detailed and accurate enough ...