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:smt024 As you wished, it's Fixed here! I'll try to pick some stuff out, but it's pretty great, really. I love it. The story is unraveling and I can see ...

:smt027 My cheese, chicka, you're really talented. I had a brother screaming at me while I read this and I still understood what was going on. I didn't really find ...

Wow, Classy this is really good. You had me hooked. I don't think I blinked while reading it. this is my first time to thoroughly critique something, so I may ...

Okay, I just finished reading every single chapter from start to here. Now I'm sad there's nothing else to read! You had me enveloped in the story, on the insect's ...

Great job!! I was hooked!! i think you should write more!! (sorry, that's what i always say, trust me ik i've been typing it but it's TRUE) I know i ...

Hey, jessabelle, it's really good. I have my own guardian angel... so that poem made me smile. I think if you just fixed the "their" and made it "there" towards ...

I, my, me, I, my, me.... That's the only thing that I had wrong with this. I love the whole idea, I thought the storyline was great! But, I lost ...

... whoa... :thud: That was... awesome. I loved it. You deserve a... dancing elephant. here, take this one => :elephant: I loved it, but i was a little confused when ...

As I tell you this, a dog sits at my feet. I really like the whole thing, but why are you scared of Eric? I may need to read over ...

Good, good. You say it was a dream? haha, the only cool dream I've had in a while is me giving an iguana a girlfriend... I know, it's weird. I ...

This was enjoyable. I love how you say that you're your own knight in shining armor for your friends, as I can relate to that in many ways. Keep that ...