icanbefixed

Dang, child!!!! I'm jealous.. You're waay too good :P I don't have anything to say, really, it's amazing. Other than the apostrophes in "can't", there's nothing wrong with it. Oh, ...

Nice poem, chief. I don't really have anything to say... yet another one of your poems brought me on the verge of tears. Good ones, though, because you're succeeding at ...

Awh, Ellie, you beat me to him! *Kilo... she's no fun ;)* Haha... Love you Ellie

I will review :) Don't take anything bad.. Just go along carefully next time. This is all in good spirits

Can I have the muffin?1 I'm hungry anyways...:) :smt024 Okay, well, Fixed here! I shall review... One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of sharp pointy cliffs and ...

:smt024 Fixed here! I shall attempt to review... this thing you call 'fail' desolation to hiss. "to hiss" made me stop for a second. I was like, "wait, what?" Change ...

I never thought I'd say this but... I wish... to die. I guess I'll review this, first. I loved it! There's nothing really wrong with it other than the fact ...

:smt024 Hey! Call me Fixed. First of all... That. Was. Elephant. :elephant: I have only two things to complain about. 1) You jumped around a little too much, you were ...

:smt024 Hey, fixed here! I'll just be picky, I guess. but struggle to realise the benefits of Fish. "realise" is spelled "realize" :) from a brief flick through of the ...

:smt024 Hi. The name's Fixed. First of all, I thought your poem was very heartfelt, but overly dramatic. There were too many... abusively lovestruck phrases used here. Sorry to be ...

hah, I find this as.. Clever. :) There's actually a poem quite like this, if you've ever heard of the books "Take me out of the bathtub"? Well.. criticism time... ...

:thud: (gasp) I loved it!!!!! :smt024 Cheeseballs, I was almost frightened by your superiority in poetry to me. My mind is blown. Here is my *attempt* at criticizing whatever I ...

:smt024 Hey! I loved your poem, but I don't think you had enough rhythm. I suppose that's how it's supposed to be, but the stanza is more like a paragraph, ...

:smt024 It was great, really. I guess I should review it... I should warn you, I'm in a rambunctious mood and wish to show it, so if you don't understand ...

:smt024 you really pulled me in. When I first started reading it, I was scared that it would end up all crazy and sad and I'd lose interest, but your ...