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A very interesting story. I am hooked to read every bit of it until the last part. I am quite confused because too many conversation ----- repeating conversation, which you've ...

What a cat! I love the way you put the story in the cat's perspective. Did it happen to you? Cause it did to me! Anyway, Very interesting story, I ...

Good Day ! :D I like the idea of innocence of these two cute little kids. What a puppy love! Anyway I think the girl is too matured to think ...

Oh GOD ! You are GENIUS ! I love reading this one :D You had summarized the book very well I mean for the person who read the book point ...

Yeah! Thanks for everything Nate!! For building this site and helping us (writers) to become a better one! You really deserve our deepest gratitude ! :) Hope you'll continue helping ...

There were plenty of errors here in this story. First, your CAPITALIZATION. I marked it with pink , it includes the names and the beginning of the sentence and paragraphs. ...

Hey I like this poem... The mystery, the use of words and everything... I just have a question, did you intentionally did not separate this poem into stanzas? Well for ...

During the whole time I am reading this, I am laughing! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha.... (that's not enough)... That is not a bad sign nor a good sign, I dony know, hehe... (I'm ...

Interesting... Elementals, some kind of a cliche eh? But I was also writing about one so that's okay :) Nitpicks: In the beginning , the four elements clashed and battled ...

Ow a nice topic to tackle ! I also had an experience like that when in my dream I already woke up but the truth was I am still trapped ...

Nightshift... Interesting title... It fitted your interesting and mysterious story. I will leave the "nitpick" part to others, but story wise, it left me questioning, who is Gron? What are ...

Wow Jen, composer? haha... Super sweet song! I want to hear it ok? And by the way, who will not cry if he received a song composed by the one ...

WHOOOSH ! I really love this novel... There were so many secrets! I have nothing else to say! Great Job... I hope the next post will be chapter 2 and ...

FUN SONG ! Spongebob's song! I liked how you put your own thing there... I am singing it with Spongebob's tune... Well it is true! I hate writer's block and ...

Hey, you held my attention up to the last word of this composition! Normally, just few boring lines made me skip reviewing it. And you just held my attention that ...