iamanaspiringwriter

I agree, I need more details. There was no name for the baby. Thanks for reviewing!

Thanks for your nitpicks and comments!! It really helps. Have to say, I was expecting worse from a ten minute story, but thanks!!!! Again, it really helps.

Well this is partly based on a true story, where the parents let the kids see the dead baby. I'll definitely try to clarify who the narrator is, thanks for ...

Thanks for your review Elysium! I'm usually a big stickler for detail when reviewing works! When I quickly read through this before I published it, I thought wow that was ...

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Hello! Happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I apologize that I have no read the previous chapters, so I guess here goes nothing! First, I'd like to say that I think ...

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Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...

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Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...

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Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...

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Hello! Iamanaspiringwriter here for review day! Overall, I thought your story was cool (I read the previous parts so I wouldn't be completely confused going into this). I'm guessing this ...

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Hello! Iamanaspiringwriter here for review day! Overall, I thought your story was cool (I read the previous parts so I wouldn't be completely confused going into this). I'm guessing this ...

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Great job! I'm sorry I'm a bit late, it's Review Day and I was digging in the Green here I am! I liked your story, even though you don't blatantly ...

Your story was very interesting, I feel like even in the end I still am conflicted with if what the doctor did was moral or not. I thought your detail ...

Thank you for your review. The feedback really helps! And about the narrator not helping her, I actually do not really know. It's the way the story went I suppose, ...

Thank you ChiravianSkies for reviewing my short story Alice. I'm glad you enjoyed it! One of my other friends mentioned it being in present tense instead of past tense, I'll ...