howmuchforhapppy

I enjoyed this, as another has said it has a very pretty vibe to it. I like how descriptive you are in your writing. Although this is more like a ...

Hello :) This was a nice read. Short and sweet. However, there are a few grammatical errors you need to fix. I do like how this poem flows. You have ...

Hi there :) This was quite an interesting read, a nice first chapter. I feel you should be a tad more descriptive for some parts left me a bit confused. ...