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I don't want to get picky about this because the majority of the flaws are what makes it beautiful to me :p But I just have to mention, i love ...

I honestly don't have any advice for this. The imagery was somewhat frightening, but I enjoyed that. I rarely feel uneasy while reading a poem. You delivered a somewhat common ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was actually very soothing, but at the same time, I felt a wave of emotions run through me (And I'm saying that in ...

In general, I think that this was very well written! What impressed me the most were your rhymes; they didn't seem silly or forced. I actually didn't even notice the ...

I enjoyed reading this poem, and I must say that you did a pretty good job. I like the whole purpose behind it. I have also befriended people who were ...

It surprises me that you are new to this. This is a very nice piece. I loved the way you wrote this and I love the message it shares. At ...

I personally don't find it too confusing. I found my own meaning when I read it. I don't know if that is within your intentions, but hey, art is what ...

This sounds like skyscraper. It's good to feel inspiration, but you can't copy what you hear. You need more than anything, to be inspired by your feelings. We all know ...

Hey! Here as you requested (: I like the honesty the poem has. The emotions are obviously very raw and very vulnerable, which can be good sometimes. I like the ...

I think that this is pretty nice! It was a creative idea. I don't want to get too grammatical but there was one paragraph that bothered me. Then I saw ...

I like the topic, and I'm sure that plenty of others will, but this gets a little messy at parts. On the second stanza you begin to rhyme and it's ...

Very nice! So as a lot of people have said, it was a relational topic. Some days you just wake up and you notice how much we judge each other ...

This has a nice topic but it just wasn't detailed or grammatically correct. I noticed that somebody already pointed that out so I'm just going to shut my trap. We've ...

I like the overall intent and I'm defiantly not saying that there's anything that you absolutely need to change about this. A poem is a poem and some critique just ...

Rhymes are very pretty, but also very distracting. These rhymes seem very forced. I think some of the comparisons could be better. This is a common topic, and you need ...