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Way to go! You wrote a song! It was pretty good as far as I know. -Lea

HAHA I LOVED IT! I'm not sure if it's classified as poetry but it'll do. It's definately on the creative side! Keep Writing

Nolan- Thank you!! Wojovox- That's a nice story. I don't know if nice should be used to describe it, but it relates to the poem, like you said. :)

I kinda liked this poem. It's very unique. Very descriptive, yeah. I don't have much to say, because I loved this poem. It's very well written. I'm not so sure ...

Thank you for commenting on my poem! Veracelle: None taken :D haha. Thank you for your ideas to make my writing better. Gamechanger10: HAHA!! Thanks. I'll work on my "flowbreaks". ...

This I created just off the top of my head. It isn't the greatest. Plus, my friend helped me. I greatly appreciate ideas & critiquing to make my writing better. ...

This is a great poem, in my opinion. Personally, I don't care about grammar, like some people [LA teacher], but it is very important.