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Re: rain on roof tops[Updated]
First off, did you use spell check? Just curious, because you have a lot of misspelled words. I think this could have a lot of potential, but I think you ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Love From The Bowels Of Non-Existence
Hey I agree, it would be easier to read if it was spaced out. Athough, I did read it and I did like it very much. There was a part ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: vampyre leagacy chapter two
This was very good. I love the description, but i also think that when you are introducing all of the other people maybe you should split it up a little. ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Cheater (or Confrontation)
I really liked this, I think it was wirtten well and had very good dialogue. But I also think the F-word was used a little too much and I think ...
Apr 17, 2008