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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Lunatic's Song

    WOW! I'm stunned. That,my friend,is a REAL modern literary piece. I like the imagery, the theme. . .or let me say, the whole piece.

    Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:09 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autmn Leaves

    ..Thanks,really..I greatly appreciate everything.. ..I first haven't notice the punctuations..sorry!..anyway, I've edited it..I hope it will sounds better.. .. love this site!!.. :)

    Wed Mar 16, 2011 10:19 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autmn Leaves

    ..Well, I don't think it is..I don't know, but, is the message a bit not connected with my poem?..

    Sat Mar 12, 2011 3:06 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autmn Leaves

    Ac h ing branches let leaves fall On c old and empty ground Th u s orange-tinted leaves of all En m esh their tears around Da y s of ...

    Mon Feb 07, 2011 1:04 pm
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tell All

    ..Three words...NICE, CAPTIVATING and STRANGE!! ..I love it..but can I request something?..Can you add at least one more stanza?.. I really want more!

    Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:19 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Autmn Leaves

    ..Thanks..I do appreciate everything.. ..Anyway,to all who've and who'll read this... ..This poem is cryptically made.. have fun finding my message..

    Sat Jan 22, 2011 11:43 am


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— The Bee Movie