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WOW! I'm stunned. That,my friend,is a REAL modern literary piece. I like the imagery, the theme. . .or let me say, the whole piece.

..Thanks,really..I greatly appreciate everything.. ..I first haven't notice the punctuations..sorry!..anyway, I've edited it..I hope it will sounds better.. .. love this site!!.. :)

..Well, I don't think it is..I don't know, but, is the message a bit not connected with my poem?..

Ac h ing branches let leaves fall On c old and empty ground Th u s orange-tinted leaves of all En m esh their tears around Da y s of ...

..Three words...NICE, CAPTIVATING and STRANGE!! ..I love it..but can I request something?..Can you add at least one more stanza?.. I really want more!

..Thanks..I do appreciate everything.. ..Anyway,to all who've and who'll read this... ..This poem is cryptically made.. have fun finding my message..