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Re: That's So Edward
HAHA! I laughed so hard. If you hate twilight watch Alex Reads Twilight on YouTube. It's super funny. Jenn
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Always and Forever
Unexpected twist at the end I didnt expect and I liked that. jenn
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: A Second Chance
This is really good and it shows human mistakes and a real humans life. I like this. You should expand it into a novel cause I know I would read ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Sweetheart (Chapter 1)
“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Haven Chapter One
I really liked this and can't wait to read more! There were no vivid errors I saw but I wasn't reading carefully I kinda forgot you were wanting to be ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar
This is good although to nitpick Hey. ” I say as I stash the bag. I'd use a comma instead. but thats me The comma after hey.
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 1
Chapter One My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me. I got up slowly, stretching every muscle in my body. I got dressed without a hesitation, having ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold (kind of re-written)
God is this sad. But good and I felt a connection to the characters which made it so sad so kudos on that one :) -Jenn
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Forgotten (Part 1)
I REALLY liked this it was romantic and made me wish I had a boyfriend like that
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: The Neighbor-Intro
It was really good and looked like a real author wrote it...I was honored to read it and would be honored if you would read mine and edit it and ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: If We Were Both Nerdy (If We Were a Movie Parody)
I REALLY liked this its WAY better than If We Were A Movie No critiques from me :)
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Wintergirls -- chilling
I READ HER BOOK SPEAK AND FELL FOR HER WRITING. SPEAK WAS A GREAT BOOK AND I LOVED READING IT!!
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: "Roller-Coaster" (A Dynamite by Taio Cruz PARODY)
i laughed so hard at this LOL!
Aug 2, 2010